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Wednesday 29 August 2018

my speech

We have been learning about persuading people in our speeches. We learned we need to have 3 good reasons to persuade people to agree with us.

Please click on the link to see my speech.


HOPE YOU LIKE IT THNAKS MAKE SHORE TO COMMENT.

6 comments:

  1. Hey Sebastian,
    Wow I was blown away by your learning! I love the way that you have linked your speech into the post and your writing is really convincing. I am not someone who litters but I hope that your post convinces any litter bugs out there to stop littering!
    I Look forward to your next post!
    - Miss Morgan

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  2. Hi Mykiala, I'm Amelia. I enjoyed the part when you mentioned the nature, and flowers because I love nature and the things it holds. Something you can improve on would be capital letters. Did you know when you pronounce it like 'catch it sounds bad. Maybe next time say that a different way. Bye!

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  3. Ki-Ora Mykiala
    My name is Kade from Rimu class
    I loved about how much you care about the environment because it is very beutiful.
    You have so much great facts about the environment.
    Bye

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  4. Hi Mykiala I like your speech Hopfuly people listen and not kill ainmals and kill us too.what would happen if we put it in the bins and not on the ground?I'm looking forward to your next post.
    By Bella.

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  5. Kia Ora,
    I loved your speech and thought it was great!
    Maybe next time you could create a slide and embed the photo and the words into it. APart from that great post!

    Kind Regards
    Julia
    Yaldhurst Model School

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    1. Thank you all of you but you julia your one is so good for me to comepet with.

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