Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. I enjoyed the part when you introduced yourself, I think you did it in quite an interesting way. Did you think about adding your capital letters. There seem to be a few missing. Next time, you could add some of those capital letters Mykiala. Why did you make a blog post about this?
Hello Mykiala, I am Julia from Rimu. I think that this post is quite well done; you have added a picture with a pop of colour which draws in the reader. Also, I know it can get confusing but in Canada, to measure the temperature they use 'Fahrenheit'. Other than that I think that this blog post was done well. Ka Pai!
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Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. I enjoyed the part when you introduced yourself, I think you did it in quite an interesting way. Did you think about adding your capital letters. There seem to be a few missing. Next time, you could add some of those capital letters Mykiala. Why did you make a blog post about this?
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DeleteHello Mykiala, I am Julia from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI think that this post is quite well done; you have added a picture with a pop of colour which draws in the reader. Also, I know it can get confusing but in Canada, to measure the temperature they use 'Fahrenheit'. Other than that I think that this blog post was done well. Ka Pai!
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Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
thank you both it was quiet hard to get it done in like 10 or 5 min
Deleteaustin,good job mykiala
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