How are you???
Today I ate a carrot and for a minute I did a before and after and videoed it.
It was bad and it felt weird.
My mouth can not get ride of the taste of carrot.
If you like the screencastify comment and like.
Hope you like it.
Enjoy it.
Here is the before.
Here is the after.
Here's the video.
Hope you like it.
Comment and like.
BYE!!!!!
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteIts Grace here,
I really like your blog post because it seems you put a lot of work into it .
I also like how you did a screencastify and not just do a before and after.
I also like you sort of talked a bit about it.
To improve I would say maybe put it into a slide so you can explain on the slide plus pt the photos together with the screencastify.
Also maybe re-read it there are a few mistakes but apart from that its really good.
Keep up the great work.
- Grace
Hi thank you for commenting on your blog post.
DeleteI will improve on my next blog post.
Thank you again.
Anyway.
Bye
Hello Mykiala, it's me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you added some photo's and a video of you eating it as well. I also like how you talked about it in the screencastify as well just to explain a little bit about what you are doing.
This reminds me of when I did this activity and honestly, it was exactly how I felt when I was eating it as well. I could not get the carrot taste out of my mouth but that was fine because I really like carrots!
I think that to improve, you could just read through it again because as Grace, had said, you had some mistakes in their but if you just do those then it would make it even better!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
HI thank you for commenting on my blog I really appreciate that.
DeleteKia ora Mykiala, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you showed us the before and after, and talked about eating the carrot.
This reminded me of when I did a blog about this. Your carrot must've been smaller than mine because I still had heaps left after the one minute.
To improve, you could put a little more colour or a slideshow, just to make it interesting.
Why did you do screenshots and a video?
Bye Mykiala!
-Amelia 😉
Hi thank you for commenting on my blog post.
DeleteI think I should improve on them things too.
Hello Mykiala,
ReplyDeleteIts Alan. I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey.Good luck.
Great blog post. I liked the part when you took the photos as well as the video.
It reminded me of The time I wrote the same blog. But that carrot was a little bit bigger than yours.
It could have been better if you added some more information so we can understand more.
Kind regards
Alan
Thank you I should have commented on your blog post.
DeleteDo you like carrots.
Thank you anyway bye.
Hello Mykiala.
ReplyDeleteIts me Renae I see you're doing the Spring Learning Journey.
This post is great. Its cool how you did photos and a video.
You might be able to add more information and tell us how you felt like that.
Any way great post Bye
Renae
Hi renae.
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog.
When I saw you I said I commented on your blog post so yeah if you could check that out.
Anyway thank you.
BYE